CatGamer 09/18/2015 7:46 PM |
Why Florida? Wouldn't you want Alaska or Greenland? Or an UNDERGROUND BASE!!!!!!!!!! |
abby 08/20/2015 11:57 AM |
i loved it! i think you could have the parents get stuck in florida and thev kids have to save them. |
CatGamer 08/20/2015 11:49 AM |
Hmmm. That could work ________.
It`s weird putting that as your name. HaHa
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brianna 08/20/2015 11:42 AM |
i spelled orphan wrong to |
______ 08/20/2015 11:42 AM |
LOL. What about different people from her family like her great grandma and grandpa and they kind of teach her about the past and how it was a lot different. |
CatGamer 08/20/2015 11:40 AM |
Orphan. UUHH
I can`t type today!!! It`s a curse. Ooohh. You could have a curse in your story.
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brianna 08/20/2015 11:40 AM |
how about a orpan that is a monster |
brianna 08/20/2015 11:39 AM |
a monster that eats brains not a zombie |
CatGamer 08/20/2015 11:39 AM |
Ghost, animal (talking?), person/kidnapper, orpan. |
______ 08/20/2015 11:36 AM |
What do you think Brianna should encounter in the house? |
CatGamer 08/20/2015 11:34 AM |
Stop! You`re getting me hungry. |
brianna 08/20/2015 11:34 AM |
you welcome |
________ 08/20/2015 11:33 AM |
okay thanks. |
brianna 08/20/2015 11:32 AM |
chocolate |
_____ 08/20/2015 11:26 AM |
okay. |
CatGamer 08/20/2015 11:22 AM |
LOL is right!
Just do piles of different flavors. HaHa |
_________ 08/20/2015 11:09 AM |
Brianna what is your favorite ice cream favor? For the story she is eating ice cream and really want the story to come alive. LOL |
brianna 08/20/2015 10:24 AM |
isn't it |
CatGamer 08/20/2015 10:23 AM |
WOW!!! What did the portal look like? Good job! |
brianna 08/20/2015 10:22 AM |
good story i love it |
________ 08/20/2015 10:20 AM |
“Now Brianna I don’t want you going outside while your dad and I are away”, Brianna’s stepmom grumbled pushing hers and Brianna’s father’s bags into the portal that shot straight to Florida.
“Yes Twyla “, Brianna sighed with a smirk. “ So when will you be back?”
“Sometime tomorrow, later in the day.” Twyla said throwing in the last bag. “Now you be good, love you”, Twyla said giving Brianna a kiss on the check.
“Love you honey, don’t forget to sort the mail on the computer.” Brianna’s dad said hugging her.
“Yes father.” Then Twyla and Brianna’s father grabbed hands and stepped into the portal. Once the portal closed Brianna ran into the house. |